Comments on: Foodie, Chapter 13

By: bad guy byte! | Catnip and Coffee

bad guy byte! | Catnip and Coffee — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 22:40:13 +0000

[...] inner workings of our bad guy’s brain over at ChapterBytes this time! AndreAnna has written Chapter 13 from Jack’s perspective as the conspiracy plot grows – go tell her what you [...]

By: katy

katy — Wed, 10 Sep 2008 16:21:04 +0000

The opening was a little hairy because it wasn’t clear who SHE was. But once that was figured out it was great!

By: Meg

Meg — Fri, 05 Sep 2008 12:56:31 +0000

She smelled like daisies and marijuana. She’d intoxicated him.

I love these lines. Great descriptions throughout!

By: Kim

Kim — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 18:39:42 +0000

AWESEOME! This just keeps getting better and better!!

By: Backpacking Dad

Backpacking Dad — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 16:19:20 +0000

In a good way.

By: Backpacking Dad

Backpacking Dad — Sat, 23 Aug 2008 16:18:57 +0000

AAAAAAHHHHHHH!

My brain is going to explode.

By: dana

dana — Thu, 21 Aug 2008 18:58:15 +0000

Wow! Incredible story-telling and plot twist! The details were excellent! Seriously great job!

Heather – All the chapters have been really good about tying up previous little inconsistencies. I’m sure the next ones will be no different!

By: Heather @ Desperately Seeking Sanity

Heather @ Desperately Seeking Sanity — Thu, 21 Aug 2008 14:04:42 +0000

Now I have to see what the next person writes, because the plan was to marry Malorie before killing her to get the money, but he didn’t do that yet… so why the premature murder attempt? what does he get from it? This should prove to be interesting…

By: Desiree

Desiree — Thu, 21 Aug 2008 04:59:49 +0000

Fantastic! Such a different direction you’ve taken. I think this was very well written and sadly ended too quickly. Great job!

By: Kristen

Kristen — Thu, 21 Aug 2008 01:08:31 +0000

Jack is turning out to be a serious SOB! I liked your description of the interrogation room. Um, not that I’ve ever been in one or anything…